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Hello!
This is a fanfiction which everyone will continue. I will start, then someone will do next chapter, another one the 3rd chapter, etc !
You must read the rules in the
Tell me which chapter you would like to write, threeninjastc@hotmail.com, so that there will not be two 'chapter 4'.
Oh! And I need a new title for this fanfiction! Give me ideas and I will choose it!
***You know that I speak French, and my English is not that good. I know there are a lot of mistakes in the 1st chapter. I would appreciate it if you tell me them! Thanks a lot. ^_^
Cast (You can add characters into the story if you want! :)) :
Colt, 15- Max Elliott Slade
Rocky, 16- Michael Treanor
Tum Tum, 12- Chad Power
Grandpa- Victor Wong
Chapter 1- This mysterious girl
By Isabelle (the owner)
**Going to Grandpa's Cabin**
The summer had just started. Samuel Sr was driving Rocky, Colt and Tum Tum to Mori's cabin. He was happy and angry at the same time; happy because he would be alone with Jessica for the whole summer, and angry because he did not like his kids to do martial arts.
"Don't fight without any reasons, Am I understood??" Samuel Sr told his kids.
"Yes..." Rocky and Tum Tum responded together.
Samuel did not hear Colt, and he asked annoyed, "Jeffrey?"
Colt was looking at the landscape and he did not pay attention to his father.
"JEFFREY??" Samuel Sr said again.
Colt finally responded, "I see... you don't trust me? Of course I won't..."
**At Grandpa's Cabin**
When they arrived at Grandpa's cabin, Samuel Sr held Colt by the shirt and said, "I hope you're going to correct your behaviour, son, I want you to change Jeffrey!"
Colt nodded and went inside with his brothers. Samuel Sr left them, going to the Douglass home.
"Will you one day be kind with Dad?" Rocky said turning to Colt.
He glanced at him, and responded, "hmm right now, I'm happy because we are far from home. And...Don't act like him...! One Dad is enought for me" Then Colt left Rocky to meet Grandpa.
"Hello boys! Ready for another summer?" said Grandpa, standing in front of them, smiling.
"Yes sir!" The three boys responded with happiness.
"I hope, because it will be harder..." Grandpa did not have time to finish his sentence...
"than last year. We are older and we are able to learn more things", finished the three boys, knowing what their grandfather would say.
"Ha ha, I see you are smarter too! Let's begin right now!"
After a big day of training, they all went to bed. Tum Tum felt asleep as fast as he could eat a lollipop. Rocky was dreaming about Emily, and Colt could not sleep. He was invaded with thoughts and images. This year, he had a girlfriend... Amy. She was amazing, with deep blue eyes. They spent great time together... But then love left its place to trouble. They skipped class to go to the beach... They arrived late because they were dancing at a party...
So one day Amy decided that it was over. In fact, she met another boy. Dylan. Colt never forgave her for what she has done to him ; lying to him while they were together. She fell in love with Dylan and Colt did not know that...
Colt was suddenly removed from his thoughts, he heard someone walking in the back yard. He went there, and noticed a beautiful girl. She had big green eyes, a perfect body (which looked in shape), a long brown hair that stopped at the middle of her back, and perfect lips. The light of the moon which reflected in her eyes made her look prettier. She was walking, looking at the beautiful flowers that Grandpa used to sprinkle each day.
Colt approached. He did not say a word. She noticed him. They were soon as close as lovers are. They stared at each other. Colt expressed the interrogation and the feeling to know this girl more, and she expressed the romance and peace.
She finally broke the ice, and said in a soft voice "Hello, young master"
"Uh, hey. How come are you hanging around here at this time, alone?" Colt said surprised.
She waited a moment, still staring at him. He was impressed by her, she was able to gaze at him without even looking away.
"You sound like my father!... Well, I just needed some time alone." She finally answered, surprised and annoyed by the question.
Colt was confused... He did not know what to say.
So she continued, "The moon is beautiful tonight, isn't it?"
"Yes, it is splendid", Colt responded.
There was a long silence... which was unbearable for Colt, but Okay for the girl.
"I was pleased to meet you, but I have to go back home..." She said.
"Oh..."
"Well... see you later, young master!" She said while she was running towards the lake.
Colt returned to his sleeping bag. 'Hello, young master', this sentence was repeated over and over again in his mind. He wanted to know more about this pretty girl.
'Oh no! What a fool I am! I forgot to tell her my name! ... and, what's HER name??' Colt thought...
Colt could not sleep... he was thinking about this mysterious girl.
Chapter 2 : Want to write it? Just tell me! threeninjastc@hotmail.com
